here is my groups cinematography work, its a 2 minute silent film about a quirky female spies worst date.
Feedback from frankie, our awesome lecturer, was that the film was too long and should be shortened down, we cant use the pink panther music as its copyrighted, but otherwise its quite good however i would say that the scene cuts could be tweaked slightly to make it flow better.
Thanks for watching. :)
here is is the final film re edited with our feedback about it
So we just had our feedback from frankie and derek about our short film which as expected wasn't so great. but both the pre production, post production and actual film presented a great learning curve for all members of the group which will hopefully mean that all our future films represent our new knowledge especially the parts about planning every little detail rather than winging sections.